Is My color poem good?This is my homework?

If you want to find Red, Bite into the Juicy tomato. Look at the fruit punch getting poured on the cup. Smell the juice of the cherry in the jar. Feel the smooth shiny bright apple from the fruit basket. Hear the gift wrapper getting wrinkled up in a ball. If you want to find Red. Poem By, Nicole
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Actually, this isn't bad. I assume your teacher asked you to write a poem using all five senses. It does the job.
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